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we are constantly trying to close up our world on the mode of our own death, to become an 'owl in the sarcophagus'. As long as some reality is still outside us we are still alive, and what is still external in that reality is what has a renewing power
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Given 2012-02-10
Matador by ~CrowCountry ( Suggested by =angelStained and Featured by ^lightningmonkey )
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~gwenvar Feb 11, 2012   Writer
Ugh, that's superhuman level :D
Took me time (and google translate :D) to figure out what it's message, but it's just as awesome as it is complicated.

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Feel it!
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~heartforaskater Feb 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
so different but brings a wonderful message. :) and its very true

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_heart_for a Skater--<3
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~aurarue Feb 10, 2012  Student General Artist
    A breath of fresh air, I found reading this wonderful piece of work of yours, was tremendously beautiful and quite so unique. Most thanks for sharing. Congratulations on the Daily Deviation, by the way.
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~charityleigh Feb 10, 2012
I feel like this will be in a book one day.
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~trigun666 Feb 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wow...i'm not particularly interested in poetry, but this one stands out..
Your work here actually insisted on being read..
Who am i to disappoint?
Thanks for sharing :)
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=Vigilo Feb 10, 2012   Writer
Congratulations on your DD! This is bizarre and gorgeous, and your diction and language is refreshingly wonderful. "cradles armfuls/of simply the arms closing to be full" is wonderful - I'm interpreting a sort of loneliness off it, and it's very well done. A lovely read. :heart:

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I made my song a coat
Covered with embroideries
Out of old mythologies
From heel to throat;
But the fools caught it,
Wore it in the world's eyes
As though they'd wrought it.
Song, let them take it,
For there's more enterprise
In walking naked.

Yeats.
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*ClioStorm Feb 3, 2012  Student Writer
the language here dances, it's beautiful :heart:

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Pain and loss define us as much as happiness or love.. Everything has its time. Everything ends.

Some things are worth getting your heart broken for.

Onen i-Estel Edain, u-chebin estel anim :heart:
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~SnowmenLikeToWrite Jan 29, 2012  Student General Artist
The descriptive touches are so scathing and even slightly monochromatic in the way it sustains a vector of implacability that defies meter or category, the hook of the introduction pulls you in immediately with a style that is unnerving but flows, and everything after that shifts almost imperceptibly to assist the transition to various points where perspective and presentation seem to gleefully mutate once again, I adore this, although I'm notoriously incapable of actual criticism, I do find this very satisfying and the prose specialized in such a way that is totally unique.

This is my favorite line, both because of the content and the placement:

"The blackout, the charge -"

"You must be sure to step from, must wish to -"

I like! Thank you for this.
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=thetaoofchaos Jan 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I enjoyed the strange metaphors and odd diction. Refreshingly unique.

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The world is an eraser for these words

- Jack Kerouac

#Word-Smiths, *DailyLitDeviations, #TheSimulacrum, #Mind-Syndicate, #vicious-verse
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=DailyLitDeviations Jan 28, 2012
Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DailyLitDeviations in a news article that can be found here [link]
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